Hello, there!
I realized that I never followed up on Project Sirius with all of you, following the conclusion of NaNoWriMo 2022!
In short, I finished book 1 in Project Sirius with time to spare! I also came in far below the 50k word goal for the month of November, but that’s perfectly okay, because I did what I set out to do! Mission accomplished, by all accounts :) The full manuscript itself came in at about 88k words, which is just about the right length for a YA Sci-Fi.
So, how do I feel about Project Sirius? I’m cautiously excited! Why cautiously? Because I’ve come to realize that just because I like something doesn’t mean everyone else will ;) But my initial proofread felt good, despite the multiple changes and additions I made to it (which is normal for a first proofread).
I’m also semi-cautious about my optimism because this doesn’t quite follow the normal ‘formula’ for a YA novel, IE the protagonist isn’t in school competing with other students. Yet some of what Mika goes through still falls well within the experiences of a young adult, while also dealing with extremely extraordinary circumstances. So I think that while breaking the ‘norm,’ I think it’ll still be enjoyable for all audiences.
At this point, two beta readers have read through Project Sirius, and their feedback was largely positive! However, my wife Beck in particular had a lot of insights that I hadn’t noticed before, and I’ve spent a lot of time thinking about what she noticed that I HADN’T noticed, and what I should do about them. In particular, regarding the protagonist Mika, whom I intentionally made has having a few character flaws, the prime one being a bit of possessiveness. I worry now that I’ve made her so possessive as to be unlikeable as a protagonist.
So, while I don’t intend to do any more actual work on Project Sirius until 2023, I will definitely be thinking about this, and about whether I should adjust her character throughout or not. There should definitely be growth on her part in book 1, but I largely wanted her possessiveness to become more contentious in book 2, and her growth in book 2 will focus a lot on that (if I stick to my current plan).
Having said all of that, I will say that I’m quite proud of the story and characters. It didn’t all turn out quite the way I wanted – I had one plan going in, and adjusted on the fly as the story played out. The story that came out is a lot more fun and intriguing than my original plan, and certainly lends itself to an ongoing story beyond book 1. I also absolutely love how the final climactic scene played out! Writing that scene had my heart thundering in my chest, and reading it during my first proofread created a similar feeling, so it stands up to repeat readings :D
So, what next? Well, next I let it sit for a while. The longer I’m willing to let it sit without another read-through, the ‘fresher’ my eyes will be when I do read it. I’ll hopefully catch more, and will be able to see what needs adjusting, and what works and should be left alone. I am, however, already coming up with details for books 2 and 3, as well as what might possibly come after book 3.
That’s all for today, thanks for reading!
-Jon Wasik